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ikyrydr2004 Member Since October 19, 2009
Neighbors Ch. 01
ikyrydr2004 5563 days ago
- 0 + I agree, needs paragraphs, I get lost
Meeting Laura
ikyrydr2004 5563 days ago
- 10 + I liked the story. Good seperation of paragraphs. Man Laura seems hot!.