icekold666
Member Since October 19, 2009
Aubrey and Kristen
by
Potatoguy123
4977 days ago
icekold666
5449 days ago
Potatoguy123
4977 days ago
icekold666
5449 days ago
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IT was a good story, but u went into a little too much detail at te beginning anout what she was doin, if u cut it a bit shorter, (the intro that is the rest was rockin!!) it would be better, i give u a 3 1/2.
Me and My Sex goddess Sister
by
TiGhTpUsSyLoVeR
TiGhTpUsSyLoVeR
I understand whqat the others are sayin, some parts are relatviely unrealistic, but the overall story was ok. i think you need to do more about her tits, k?
Me and Mah Sisters
by
icekold666
icekold666
This was only her first one. they'll get better as she gets better at writing