homegrownvaboy
Member Since October 19, 2009
Caught by Teen Girls
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anonymous
4395 days ago
homegrownvaboy
4385 days ago
anonymous
4395 days ago
homegrownvaboy
4385 days ago
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Hell of a copy and paste from an old story that you found on this website.
Caught by Teen Girls
by
anonymous
anonymous
With a little searching you can find part 2 under the original author's page.
HIS FIRTS
by
anonymous
anonymous
Please remember, little children aren't allowed on this website. Do not post again.
Naturally, we have to assume the "author" is a child as no adult would ever put something up like this. I didn't even bother reading it after looking at the formatting alone.
Naturally, we have to assume the "author" is a child as no adult would ever put something up like this. I didn't even bother reading it after looking at the formatting alone.
stepsister and the bluetick walker
by
anonymous
anonymous
Is this supposed to be a story or a 3rd grade book report on an erotic novel? It was so poorly written that I clicked on it to see just how short it is. Never submit another story. You're pathetic excuse for a story has already taken up too much space.
Me & My Sister (PART 3) (FINAL PART)
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everlastingxxx
everlastingxxx
You have yet to submit a story that has been worth reading. All you do is plug your shitty site over and over again. You and your kind should be banned from this site. You are worthless and have zero talent.
Me & My Sister (PART 2)
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everlastingxxx
everlastingxxx
No one wants to check out your shitty site or read your lame fucking stories. You're a complete waste of time and people like you are killing this site. Never submit anything again and stop posting a like to your fail blog. You are worthless and will never amount to anything. It's pathetic that you're spamming and trying to pass of this dribble as actual stories. Children books have more to them then the shit you submit.
16 year old has fun with bosses wife
by
lachie90
lachie90
sadly 1 star is the lowest i can give. i've had sneezes that lasted longer than this "story."
Perverted Prist
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Brigit Astar
Brigit Astar
Well, aside from the brevity of the story, you jumped right into it. You need to start building your characters more. Try actually reading books that don't have pictures so you know what character development is.
Bus Driver Fucks a Student
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Venichi8
Venichi8
Your story is as short as it is unbelievable. one of the things that make an erotic story good is the fact that it could possibly happen. Your story is so far out of the realm of possibilities that you have probably driven people away from this site thi
Bus Driver Fucks a Student
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Venichi8
Venichi8
Ladies if my sory made you cum, I would love to see you reading...send comments to venichi8@zapak.com
This is not a site to hook up with people and if a woman came while reading this she would have to be on a LOT of drugs. While you can get off in l
This is not a site to hook up with people and if a woman came while reading this she would have to be on a LOT of drugs. While you can get off in l
Caugth in the act
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pgv100
pgv100
you actually submitted something this short and thought it would pass? i feel bad to even give you a star. if i could give you no stars i'd feel better.
FINALLY!!! I HAN MY COUSIN FOR BREAKFAST
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traits_tres
traits_tres
Your writing style is simply atrocious. I don't think anyone will even bother reading this grammatical abortion because you butchered the English language worse than an inner city youth who's virtually deaf. The only advice I can offer is to never submit
My story as a teen
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metcalpa
metcalpa
okay, first of all i didn't bother reading the whole thing because the format was shot to hell. normally i can over look that... until i ran into horrible spelling errors. after i started scrolling down i find that there is more structure (and by that i
Summer Pool Sex
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sexy_boater
sexy_boater
Please never again write. I have seen short stories before, but this is shorter than a midget who never hit puberty. I can honestly say you shoudn't submit another story to any site until you start actually putting some time and effort into them. Serio
I Swear I Locked the Door!
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teeman2000
teeman2000
Didn't get too far but seemed alright. The main issue that makes this unreadable is the utter lack of paragraphs.
Valerie Growing up
by
topshaper
topshaper
Would be nice if you gave the original author credit if you're just going to repost a story you found on this site.
Goodnight Kiss
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thegreenscar3
thegreenscar3
Please, never EVER submit a story to any site again. The fact that I don't even have to scroll down to see the "full story" is pathetic. There was no real story here. You have no character development at all, no description, and frankly, it sounds like you get off in less than 2 minutes. So please, don't waste our time or the site's bandwidth with another one of your "stories."
Hot For Teacher
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realstories
realstories
Just because you add more spaces than you have lines in your story doesn't make it better. Please resubmit when it doesn't look like you don't know how to use a computer.