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gottoloveme Member Since October 19, 2009
Homecoming
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 10 + that was awesome, short and hot. lol
Lost in lust
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 10 + I liked it but in a way that scared me. such intense words. *shivers*
Sometimes, tolerance gets outta limit
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 10 + the spelling was a bit off and the plot was a tad hmmm.....strange
Angel part one
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 10 + I think you did a wonderful job with this story, the writing was very detailed and I espeically enjoy that main character. She's so cute. ^_^
Me and my best friend
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 1 + For one thing, you don't name a girl in any sex stories Fish, it's just not very flattering. Second thing is the story is very short and not very detailed. A bad mix.
Adventure on the Lake
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 6 + It has a very cute plot line but the writing is a bit clumsy so if you can make it flow better than you would have a great story on your hands. Good luck
Land Of Oz
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 10 + Sounds more like a virgin fantasy then a real story.
The Snowstorm - Part I
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 8 + I think you did a really great job with this story, nice plot and cute characters. The change in the tone of the story was sudden but I'm not complaining. Wonderful use of words by the way.
Goddess in the Making
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 10 + You have a great deal of talent and it shows very neatly in this story. I hope you write many more stories like this one. Great job
School Days.
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 5 + it felt so stiff and not in the good way either lol. it was natural and smooth it was a bit choppy.
Naughty next door - Forced to fuck
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 10 + Don't listen to Mogen, that was the perfect pace. *shivers* I love this series. And Mogen if you read the other ones, you would see it was a bit slow paced at the beginning but it's picking up speed now and it's awesome.
A Day In The Life
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 10 + I think if you give the sex a little more details it would be a very good story. Make it hotter in other words. lol
Black Roses' Incest Tales
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 6 + I thought it was good, love short storys.
Was it rape ?
gottoloveme 5542 days ago
- 5 + better spelling and you got yourself a story