golfadikt2
Member Since October 19, 2009
Texas Heat Part 1
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smk
5071 days ago
golfadikt2
5543 days ago
smk
5071 days ago
golfadikt2
5543 days ago
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You call this a story? This is more like a teaser! Don't post until you have the story finished!
jess and liam
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eggycheese
eggycheese
Great start to the story, but you need to finish it. I agree with a previous post, please don't use 1 letter substitutes for words. Also, check your grammar. You kept going from past tense to present tense and back.
My brother, my lover, on the dock, naked?
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DeeDee18
DeeDee18
I didn't quite understand the beginning with the bike ride... but the whole story was freakin' HOT HOT HOT!!!! IS THERE MORE?!?!?!
My Daughter and ME
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necodemas
necodemas
Probably a great story but I couldn't get past the lack of punctuation and the lack of paragraghs!