gman
Member Since October 19, 2009
Spring Break
by
ThePantyNinja
ThePantyNinja
When you look at the quality of recent stories, this one stands out as one of the better stories. For a first effort, it is a good one.
However, if you compare it to well written stories, it winds up being about average.
There were a few mistakes in
However, if you compare it to well written stories, it winds up being about average.
There were a few mistakes in
Making Christina Pt 1 & 2
by
AcousticDavid
AcousticDavid
Again, the comments speak volume. Having submitted stories in the past and having proofed stories for others, I know how frustrated some authors get when the read the bashing regarding their work.
This story fell far short and aside from the authors not
This story fell far short and aside from the authors not
Lisa
by
heater
heater
I am starting to realize why the quality of stories has gone done now that SSP has switched formats.........because the good authors got tired of having their stories bashed.......now with a newer crop of writers, they have to take the brunt of comments l
Lisa
by
heater
heater
My comments offer up something on how to improve the story. Bashing is when you put comments like "absolutely unrealistic crap". How can an author improve with comments like that?
Look at what I wrote. I only put comments on how to improve the story a
Look at what I wrote. I only put comments on how to improve the story a
Lisa
by
heater
heater
I was trying to highlight the fact that they were supposed to be "comments".......I should have thrown them in parantheses.
Besides, I have realized over the past week or so that it isn't the authors fault, it is SSP that should be taken out behind the s
Besides, I have realized over the past week or so that it isn't the authors fault, it is SSP that should be taken out behind the s
Shaving Christy: Revised
by
SilentSpirit
SilentSpirit
I too read the original version and this has been cleaned up, but not enough to repost it as a "revision".
I know you said you proofread it over and over again, but it is YOU reading the same thing over and over again. When you write a story and read it
I know you said you proofread it over and over again, but it is YOU reading the same thing over and over again. When you write a story and read it
Parking Lot Sex
by
MarineXXX
MarineXXX
This story wouldn't have gotten through if SSP had their act together.
Why keep bashing the authors? Start bashing SSP.
It is one thing to write this, but it is another thing to have a site "review" it and then feel it is good enough to post.
GMan
Why keep bashing the authors? Start bashing SSP.
It is one thing to write this, but it is another thing to have a site "review" it and then feel it is good enough to post.
GMan
Peep Show
by
Lizzie
Lizzie
I agree with the posting that says "Like most every other recent posting"......but that is as far as I agree.
First, if you are going to comment, please leave something constructive. The author writes and posts for YOUR PLEASURE. If you don't like it o
First, if you are going to comment, please leave something constructive. The author writes and posts for YOUR PLEASURE. If you don't like it o
Peep Show
by
Lizzie
Lizzie
but at least give the author something to improve with, that is all I am suggesting.
I think it goes a long way to say "your story is terrible"...........BUT, here is how you can improve. Telling people to stop writing or to go kill themselves before th
I think it goes a long way to say "your story is terrible"...........BUT, here is how you can improve. Telling people to stop writing or to go kill themselves before th
Nurse Jessica
by
SilentSpirit
SilentSpirit
This story has some promise, but fell a bit short of being a good story. First, your story started off well and had some good buildup, but that is where it stopped.
I agree there were some dialogue issues, but rather than just bash you like the first c
I agree there were some dialogue issues, but rather than just bash you like the first c
Rebecca
by
anerotic54
anerotic54
I read my way through the "wall of words" and there is some pretty decent writing in here.......BUT.......it was lost.
Break up the story and you just may have something.
G
Break up the story and you just may have something.
G
Donna's Workout Part 2
by
olmike4evr
olmike4evr
Clearly one of the better stories on here in a LONG LONG time. Great follow up to the original chapter also.
Story was well written, flowed well, dialogue was realistic and formatted to read easily.
Great job....
GMan
Story was well written, flowed well, dialogue was realistic and formatted to read easily.
Great job....
GMan
I think I would have enjoyed this story if the "reviewer" hadn't cut it off and poste