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galloron Member Since October 19, 2009
Blackmail in the Swimming Pool by beachgirl69 5071 days ago
galloron 5543 days ago
- 10 + This story really lacked alot. You sounded about 12 in it with your wording. Try writing in Word or something...though it won't fix the fact that the story isn't believable, it might help with your spelling, and grammar.