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fredef Member Since October 19, 2009
My Sister and Me
fredef 5543 days ago
- 8 + Pretty good start. I would suggest that the story develops to where the boy and friends gang rape his sister.
Football Gangbang
fredef 5543 days ago
- 6 + Thanks for writing this.... Didn't expect it, at least not this quick. Well done, 'girl'! Think I got it right this time :-) But I still like the previous one better, not as violent.
In the Gym
fredef 5543 days ago
- 8 + Dude, bravo! I've been looking for 'sports rape' for so long, and finally you made one. I'm good with the paragraph thing as long as it's readable. Here's a suggestion for you: why not try to write something about some football guys raping a cheerleader?!