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elicummings Member Since October 19, 2009
Beautiful by babykaitfish1987 5312 days ago
elicummings 5609 days ago
- 8 + Not bad for a first attempt. Matter of fact, not bad period! Good use of paragraphs, it makes it so much easier to read, I wish more people would do that. Good attention to spelling and punctuation as well.

Please continue. Dad can do lots of things wi