
donpepsi2
Member Since October 19, 2009
Vacatition with my daughter
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rekrap
5450 days ago
donpepsi2
5687 days ago


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This was a decent story so I gave it a two for that. But the puncuation is just awefull. There's nothing worse than trying to read a story that should be a few paragraphs long but is really one long ass sentence.