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desertbear Member Since September 13, 2010
He Knocked Up His Daughters by Brigit Astar 5310 days ago
desertbear 5218 days ago
- 0 + Good story idea, porn writer's family life, but for a writer he sure does have a limited vocabulary. It might have been more fun if he didn't know the daughters knew what he did or if he'd had writer's block after his wife died and went looking for inspiration from his daughters. Great outline please develop the why parts of the story.