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cousin_turns_me_on Member Since October 19, 2009
A Sons Touch
cousin_turns_me_on 5543 days ago
- 6 + Way too short for me! Next time increase the length! It got me going on the other hand!
Making Daddy Feel Good
cousin_turns_me_on 5543 days ago
- 2 + Too short for me, make part 2 longer. Also paragraphs are better, makes the story easier to read, best bet is to re-write and re-post it.