kcid25
Member Since October 24, 2009
HIS FIRTS
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anonymous
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kcid25
3972 days ago
anonymous
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How can we get one of the site admins to pull this post?
A former student
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anonymous
anonymous
Not only is it in the wrong section, it's also 1 freeking paragraph. This is one of the hardest reads I've seen in quite a while. This story is from the views of a teacher, teachers would know how to use paragraphs and such.
My amazing time babysitting
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anonymous
anonymous
My ONLY complaint is, no paragraphs, made it difficult for me to read, as I am dyslexic. Other then that, I can only thank you as it brings back great memories of when I baby-sat for the little one across the street. Very similar situation. See my stories starting with http://www.sexstoriespost.com/stories/story/116472/ />
Good job and keep them coming and coming and coming.
Good job and keep them coming and coming and coming.
My sexy new neighbor
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Morgen
Morgen
I liked this one. A story from the woman's point of view is usually a great read. This one was great. However, I would like to hear more about summer camp.
making school more fun
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anonymous
anonymous
I loved the story, it's a fantastic theme. A few grammatical errors, but overall, a good read. It left me with a small hard on. If I had teachers like this, I would have done much better paying attention in school.
making school more fun
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anonymous
anonymous
I too found the spelling and grammatical errors a bit distracting, but I guess this is why it is fantasy. For most, the fantasy is the sex, for others, the fantasy is being a language arts teacher.
If Janey only had a sister
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janey1113
janey1113
I think they were 9 when they started talking about boys, not when this actually happened, because they would have had to have been 13 or older to participate in such an act according to the rules of this site.
Hot Little Neighbor Girls 2: Tiffany joins the action!
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pervnxtdoor
pervnxtdoor
nice but you need to work on paragraphs... this was really hard to read.
My Daughter Brianne-The Beginning
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thorne2012
thorne2012
REMOVED????? This sounds like it would be right down my alley. Please, repost it or PM me I'll give you my email.
Adam comes home for Christmas
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UpperTown
UpperTown
By all means continue, but first.... I loved the story, till you started going crazy with words like TWAT, MEAT, and DINK HEAD. Then he popped her cherry, figured she was on the pill, then was surprised again that he popped her cherry? Did her screams not indicate something? I've only had 2 virgins, but when I hit the hymen, I knew what I was in for....
Continue the story line but please, keep it real, it's far more enjoyable.
Continue the story line but please, keep it real, it's far more enjoyable.
Kate & Jim
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beagle9690
beagle9690
Well, no not well, VERY WELL written.. excellent story, not what I would call EROTICA, but it is a good romantic sexy story. Cant' wait for chapter 2.
My neighbor and masturbation
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anonymous
anonymous
This needs to be re-written, but not from the viewpoint of a 12 year old, it needs to be written by someone that can write. Ok, so I wanked and so she came to the door and I'm thinking SHIT.
Come one, far too immature.
Come one, far too immature.
Mom and Daughter
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TexasRose
TexasRose
Loved the story, but I think it may have been better if written in the 1st person, for example, if you had written it from Linda's perspective. Now I'm a big fan of Mom/Daughter type stories, so please, find Linda and get more.
Thanks
Thanks
Young Virgin
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nickthedick
nickthedick
Sorry, this was boring and predictable. It was all from your prospective, and not very descriptive.
The Little Pussy Bar
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urguyscott
urguyscott
NIce story, but you you have to watch your spelling. I lost count of how many ORGANISMS there were, but there were more of them then there were ORGASMS. Spell check won't catch that. YOU have to.
Now if you will excuse me, I have to go jack off.
Thanks
Now if you will excuse me, I have to go jack off.
Thanks
My Nephew and My Wife having sex infront of me.
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anonymous
anonymous
Yeah, had problems with your choice of words, spelling Dian and then Diane then Dian again, and what was your nephew's name? Mark? Paul?
This made the story difficult to follow, and more difficult to believe. The things about stories here is, they have to have a level of believability, and well, this one doesn't. You met at college, and that's great, but with your age and expected education, I would expect the story to be better written.
This made the story difficult to follow, and more difficult to believe. The things about stories here is, they have to have a level of believability, and well, this one doesn't. You met at college, and that's great, but with your age and expected education, I would expect the story to be better written.
It shouldn't have happened but it did
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klm0559
klm0559
I am sporting wood, thanks, but like everyone said, a bit rushed, and needs paragraphs, That alone will make it easier to read.
David & Susan's After School Education
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kevinw5766
kevinw5766
The story is great, I love these, I only wish you had spent more time describing their bodies, the tastes. I remember being that age, experimenting with oral, and the taste of pussy at that age, for me anyway, was the best thing there ever was. I can still imagine the taste of the first girl I ate. I remember how her pussy juices tasted a bit salty, smooth, slick on my tongue. That is the only thing I think that was missing.
my niece and her friend stay over
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tigersblood
tigersblood
To be honest, I would have to guess you are about 15. The spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors were quite distracting. Please keep writing but use a spell check and a grammar check. Re-read what you have written before you submit it. I know it's difficult to read this after you just wrote, but if you sit on it for a few days it will help.
From what I got from your story, it's quite a good start. Thanks
From what I got from your story, it's quite a good start. Thanks
Big Brother 3
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Lil Jan
Lil Jan
I'm thinking Mom should join in. I'll bet she can eat a pussy better then Brother can.
My Big Brother
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Lil Jan
Lil Jan
I loved the story, but I HATED the "oh brother this and the sis that" shit. I have never heard a brother and sister talk like that, and in the heat of passion, I doubt I would hear it there. Add to that the spelling and grammar mistakes, it got a little difficult to read, however, the fact that I often fantasized about the little sister I didn't have, I made it work for me. The story was stimulating and believable. Please write more.
My kinky nudist family
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humbert1
humbert1
This was painful to read. The story was so choppy. Your spelling is horrible.
A mom's memory!!
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dagored
dagored
Excellent story. Please do not write more on this, you ended it perfectly.
Please do, however write more.
Please do, however write more.
Younger Sister
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Qupid143
Qupid143
This is 3 dick's down. It is at the least, a difficult read. No punctuation, and each sentence is a paragraph.
Like IronEagle said, please learn English.
Like IronEagle said, please learn English.