goofy
Member Since October 19, 2009
Me and Caitlin
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jackhard
5102 days ago
goofy
5573 days ago
jackhard
5102 days ago
goofy
5573 days ago
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i am truely amazed, i think this is the shortest story on the website.
My redheaded neighbor
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thechaseter
thechaseter
the story was great, but you changed her name from hayley to maci... and the spelling and grammar should be done better.
hopefully you do a sequel (and decide on a name, and have better spelling)
hopefully you do a sequel (and decide on a name, and have better spelling)
“I need your help. Can I Come Over?†Pt.2
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jack_of_blades
jack_of_blades
Very good, but not as good as the first one.
A Very Extra Credit...Beth's First Lesson
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CZuck83
CZuck83
yeah there have been a few recently, but this is my favorite.
keep em commin!
keep em commin!
WTF's High School Defense Force - Lesson II
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Deathnote
Deathnote
Well instead of jumping to conclusions and throwing accusations like he did I will try to give you some posotive advice.
Firstly, I enjoyed part I.
The story was difficult to follow, The intro thing that was like a story talking about the story coul
Firstly, I enjoyed part I.
The story was difficult to follow, The intro thing that was like a story talking about the story coul
WTF's High School Defense Force - Lesson II
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Deathnote
Deathnote
I honestly Did have that response nicely typed with paragraphs to make it easy to read, but the feedback thing made it a wall of words :(
A Sudden Occurence Part II
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thingermahjig
thingermahjig
great story, but that other guy put the exact same review for the triplets story... hopefully there is a 3 and 4 though!
The Twelve Commandments: Chapter One: Thou Shalt Plunder Thy Neighbor's Youngest
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
great writing, but i am confused as to how the story will continue if the rapist is dead...
The Twins on Vacation
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Mopac12003
Mopac12003
i would have given a 3... but dan the man didnt like the settings so he underscored it.. lol.
i would like a continual, and you dont need as much detail as you had, but it can stay. just make sure there are more sex scenes.
i would like a continual, and you dont need as much detail as you had, but it can stay. just make sure there are more sex scenes.
Raped and abused Slut Wife
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sexybabymindy
sexybabymindy
great story, i think you should post the alternate ending also!
(asking for the alt ending was all i really wanted... to say, besides this story is great, hmm i feel like that female judge on american idol)
(asking for the alt ending was all i really wanted... to say, besides this story is great, hmm i feel like that female judge on american idol)
Me And My Sister Sneek In
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tommy_666
tommy_666
i recently awarded someone for having the shortest story on the site (that i had seen) and holy shit, you definantly came close. i dunno who won, i dont want to know because it would require wasting 35 seconds of my life reading this lame shit again.
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My New Ability
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skybandit
skybandit
i agree with Master c.
btw, he could control girls too right? ehh probably will find out next chapter.
btw, he could control girls too right? ehh probably will find out next chapter.
The day my sister was home from school
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freaky4fun
freaky4fun
the story didnt have nearly as bad grammar or spelling as i was afraid it would have, but it seemed to be lacking somethin, not sure what. but grammar could use work same with some spelling. but it is a good idea.
First time with daddy
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wyldewynd
wyldewynd
yeah the grammar sucked, i can understand not capitalizing after a sentence, cuz i dont do that alot, but not spacing after the sentence and the grammar...
the sentences were extrememly choppy. when you said b4 i was shittin myself...
it was like
the sentences were extrememly choppy. when you said b4 i was shittin myself...
it was like
Shona and Friends - Chapter 2: Thursday
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theBlackDouglas
theBlackDouglas
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time!
Don't stop!
Don't stop!
Family Fuck Friday- Chapter one
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blahblah69
blahblah69
hah those comments make me laugh...
oh well its imaginative...
i hope.
it had me turned on then it just collapsed... at the point where he killed the mom it started getting a bit too fucked up.
oh well its imaginative...
i hope.
it had me turned on then it just collapsed... at the point where he killed the mom it started getting a bit too fucked up.
Suprise Switch - a better version of Freaky Friday Part 1, 2 & 3
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Pat_Tomason
Pat_Tomason
excellent story, will there be a prologue?
My Son The Inventor - Ch5 - Like an episode from the Simpsons
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writethis69
writethis69
Every chapter was excellent, I can't wait for more!
My Son The Inventor - Ch1 - I need some volunteers
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writethis69
writethis69
Excellent story, that's all I can say, I saw no problems what-so-ever.
Gothic Trick or Treat
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publisher
publisher
An excellent story, and very well written, I can't wait for part 2.
Triplets - Home Tuition
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Gehenna
Gehenna
i loved part 2 too, i had already rated this but the internet decided to crap out, i love how you try to keep it realistic. you definantly have talent! waiting for more!
Triplets – Co-ed Home Tuition
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Gehenna
Gehenna
heh, im glad the 2nd of the series (hopefully) was posted also. if there is any more, i would love for it to be posted, as it is an excellently written story.
Brother Visits Sister Ch. 1
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breastgirl34c
breastgirl34c
hah you changed the name so much!
but it was still good, cant wait for part 2
btw i liked michelle the most.
but it was still good, cant wait for part 2
btw i liked michelle the most.
Turning 18 what fun! (second stage)
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bouncytig06
bouncytig06
i mis the old title though... :(
other than that same comments as before.
other than that same comments as before.