drama_queen
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Glory Hole
by
pace_purr
5071 days ago
drama_queen
5543 days ago
pace_purr
5071 days ago
drama_queen
5543 days ago
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4
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Certainly a notorious beach these days, following the recent race-riots! Not bad, but way too short to be memorable.
Who's To Say?
by
Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
Obviously not what most readers here are going to want to see though. They don't want to think...just to get themselves off. It's sad coz Callie is worth so much more than that. That first reviewer must have been a girl too. Hope ur back with Harper Valle
Who's To Say?
by
Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
I just loved this story. What a wake-up call among all this other crap. Almost made me ashamed for reading this stuff.
My Georgia Peaches - Chapter 2
by
BVRETR
BVRETR
Compared to most everything else getting posted here these days, a masterpiece. Still, a little disappointing and a lot less than the first chapter (prologue) promised. You need to develop the characters a lot more to make it interesting....take away th
The Babysitter
by
luvbunny92
luvbunny92
Whoever wrote this must be in 5th grade. It is so childish and uneducated as to be embarrassing! Go back to finger-painting!
All I wanted to do was fuck the shit out of her...
by
storieteller
storieteller
To even write what you have, describes the type of guy you must be - heaven help any future g/f or wife. What a total LOSER!
Sisterly love
by
roger28752000
roger28752000
You call this a story? What...it must have taken six illiterate minutes to write at most!
What I want to know is what submissions do SSP's editors REJECT???
What I want to know is what submissions do SSP's editors REJECT???
Rapist Diary
by
Journalist
Journalist
What theese word "theft" darning? You mean thief? "Harry" no sound like Russian name - more like poor Haroldski? I have always needed to be rape yes? by Russian fitness trainer - you make house calls in your Volga? That fine - I bring the Smirnoff!
Making a Slave Part 1
by
Penance
Penance
Learn how to present a story in terms of spacing, paragraphs, indentation for speech etc etc. Then write a "story" not a postcard. Even though it is Part One, it should have been at least 10-12 pages to be interesting!
Not without hope though, and bett
Not without hope though, and bett
Childhood Friends
by
ThePope
ThePope
Pretty dumb writing your own one-word review "Pope," doncha know it shows your name when u submit it?
Once Upon A Childhood
by
Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
How could so many people have read this and not left a comment? I can't believe it! Maybe a girl sees more in it. I don't mind saying it made me cry at the end. easily the best-written story I've ever seen here. I wonder what Ruth herself would think if
Downtown with No Money Part 1
by
Rydeordie467
Rydeordie467
Simple to be sure, but very sexy - one of the best things I've read.
best ever expirience
by
hornylee
hornylee
Completely illiterate trash. You sound like someone in Jerry Springer's audience. Question is, WHY would SSP figure this is good enough to publish. It insults their OWN editorial department.
The Rapist Chronicles: Part III
by
TeenGangBanger
TeenGangBanger
Well apart from length, punctuation, dumbass dialog, presentation, lack of paragraphs and total unreadability, its not even average!
The Girl Down The Street Part 3
by
pusshunter
pusshunter
"Probably not as good as the last??" you say? You're right!
Oh and by the way, speaking of dumb spellos....
'gorgous' is spelt gorgeous
'gaurd' is spelt guard
'tounging' is spelt tonguing... etc
yeah...real classy stuff!
Oh and by the way, speaking of dumb spellos....
'gorgous' is spelt gorgeous
'gaurd' is spelt guard
'tounging' is spelt tonguing... etc
yeah...real classy stuff!
The day I found out I was double jointed
by
davidj
davidj
Following the awesomely moronic story title, comes the dumbest, most illiterate, completely unpunctuated and juvenile "postcard" of a story any idiot ever submitted. (Says a lot for SSP's editors)
You can't even write an intelligent, punctuated review
You can't even write an intelligent, punctuated review
Ngoc and Hien
by
Aussiegreg
Aussiegreg
just what could be less sexy to the reader than a 45 year-old Vietnamese woman. I mean C'mon!!!!! This is grossout!
Asian College Apartment
by
davide5six
davide5six
Every second person on the planet wears panties. Just how big a thrill can playing with them or sniffing them (double yuk!!!) be? men who get off on this are kinda missing the big picture I think. Not exactly the domain of a big thinker is it?
Harper Valley Family Crisis
by
Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
How great was this series? I bought the book and have just finished the final chapter - the last paragraph on its own was worth the price of the book, it was just so moving....the very last line actually made me shiver. I thought your last three episode
Liz gets knocked out and knocked up
by
SexKitten83
SexKitten83
"His eyes were green with short brown hair" That's much like saying "Her breasts were small with dark green eyes"
You must be about thirteen years old or you left school in 9th grade.
Unreadable color font (not that it's worth reading) and I got
You must be about thirteen years old or you left school in 9th grade.
Unreadable color font (not that it's worth reading) and I got
Daddy's Naughty Daughters
by
UK_Younglover
UK_Younglover
About as realistic as Davy Crockett in a dress! Dialog beyond stupid and clinically impossible.
Things That Go Bump in the Night
by
Temptress4
Temptress4
One of the better stories appearing here for ages. Well done!
TABOO
by
ashish
ashish
Reads like it was badly translated from some third-world manuscript. Total YUK! What is SSP pulling here? like this is worth a ten???
Delectable Daughter: Part 2
by
Jr.Kong69
Jr.Kong69
The pathetic dialog in these stories would insult the talents of anyone in seventh grade. For moronic readers only
A Quickie
by
davidj
davidj
Obviously "voted" a 10 by the author, this is as bad as it gets! Go back to school and get educated!
Family Photos
by
otto666
otto666
This HAS to be the most repulsive story ever published here. What's wrong with you?