comsmith22
Member Since October 19, 2009
The babysitter and my mother
by
souterjohnny
5071 days ago
comsmith22
5542 days ago
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5
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this a great story... Its Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of the horny folks
The babysitter and my mother
The story line is great…
Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of this horny family
Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of this horny family
Leah's Wild Sexual Adventures - Chapter 5
looking forward to the next chapters...
Discoveries Of A Young Boy
the list is missing parts 7-8-9 ...
are thy posted in another location?
are thy posted in another location?
Mother sucks me
great start i am looking for the next installments ... looking forward to seeing who comes next...
A Little Bit of Force
Great start of a series, short, sweet, hot and wet... I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes from here...
Thanks
Geo
Thanks
Geo
A Little Bit of Force
fantastic start keep the series "cumming"
A Little Bit of Force
great start for a series...
A Little Bit of Force
great story Hot wet and deep...
FINALLY!!! I HAN MY COUSIN FOR BREAKFAST
good start ... just need to use the Spell and collect thoughts and then express check in a story format... your not "IM'ing" you best friend your score from last night... you actually have the the start for a series when you have it formatted properly MS
Camryn: C09
Its a great start, break it down into paragraphs and write chapter 2
My 14th Birthday Part2
Not a bad follow, up a bit on the short side. I am interested in seeing what cums next...
ya need to use spell check... a little grammar, punctuation and proof reading... is also in line.
ya need to use spell check... a little grammar, punctuation and proof reading... is also in line.
walking in on my sister
Hot story... I hope you have more installments to cum
A New Home For Sandy
Great beginnings looking forward to more...
Sleeping Cousin
Ya just need to get more into it ... its not a last minute essay for English class
my erotic lesson
A bit long in getting to the point but its hot wet and to the point... I'm looking forward to more adventures of this bunch of lusty Teens
my erotic lesson
Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of the horny teens and their dogs…
my erotic lesson
this was hot and knocked the socks off... I hope your going to continue the story...
my erotic lesson
Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot, simple, and to the point. I am looking forward to the further adventures of this horny teen and her pets…
my erotic lesson
Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of the horny teens and their pets…
Caught by my twin, then taught her how.
Great beginnings... I'm looking forward to more installments...
Girlfriend's play while husband's "away"
Its a fantastic start ... I am waiting for the rest of the story and the following chapters... I am looking forward to seeing the fun between the girls and Rex!!!
Joyce and I Do The Lab
I am hooked on Teresa's exploits ... I am waiting to see what cums next for Teresa
IT SHOCKED ME
Great beginnings... I'm looking forward to more installments...
I seduced my brother's friends
I am falling in love ... or lust with little Nikki... your stories are so well done and and so Hot... Thank you Bev...
Horny Aunt,Cousin,& Sister at Thanksgiving PT.3
Great beginning for a new series... I'm looking forward to reading more of their exploits
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A few things...
1… Use proper punctuation, capitalization and spell check.
2… You are writing a story, not texting your “BFFâ€, stop with the text type speech…
Now the story is good and well laid out… and your intro to the next chapter
1… Use proper punctuation, capitalization and spell check.
2… You are writing a story, not texting your “BFFâ€, stop with the text type speech…
Now the story is good and well laid out… and your intro to the next chapter
CAUGHT BY MY WIFE
hot story ... thanks ... i am looking forward to reading what happens next ... are more engagements planned ... possibly with friends???
my first time with blackie
hot story ... thanks ... i am looking forward to reading what happens next with his pet dog
My Trick with My Dick
love the brother sister thing...
A few things...
1… Use proper punctuation, capitalization and spell check.
2… You are writing a story, not texting your “BFFâ€, stop with the text type speech…
A few things...
1… Use proper punctuation, capitalization and spell check.
2… You are writing a story, not texting your “BFFâ€, stop with the text type speech…