breastgirl34c
Member Since October 19, 2009
Naughty Stepdaughter
by
hornydaddy4262
5070 days ago
breastgirl34c
5543 days ago
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6
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you're starting off great! That surprise beginning was good and the whole thing was full of lots of action, nice job.
Swimming Time With Sister
very nice first part, totally hot, totally turning me on! Please continue I wanna know more.
Katie and me
very quick story, not badly written though.
Sara's Story: Babysitting
Way to go, great story, can't wait for the rest to come out. Please make it soon.
Shana – A 16 year old runaway
Great story! Can't wait to hear more! Please continue the saga. Maybe tell what the group does. Nice job though!
Jenny part 3
I love this series, you gotta continue!
DARBY FINDS HER SATISFACTION
Nice, keep up the good work, looking foreword to the next story
Jen Bob and I
Interesting story, liked it though.
Me and Kaylee- Part Two
I donno if I would believe that a girl who just got raped went off and had sex all night with out thinking twice.
Dinner and a Movie
Is there more? please say there's more!
My brother, my lover, my mother, my dad, my lovers younger sister, etc.
not a bad story. Liked the characters, made it very interesting with the lesbian sister and her friend in the whole thing. And you left it open for more... yay!
Kathy's Crazy Family
good story, did well setting it up, should've spent more time describing the dad and daughtor having sex, but maybe the next one, I'm looking foreword to it.
Me and my Hot Neighbor
you wish.. A little far fetched. A 12 year old with 36DD, that's a little unbelieveable.
My brother, my lover, Part three
That was soo hot! I love it! Who was this Angie friend? Expand on that?
melissa is my favorite
Ummm... did you forget something? Like the story?!
Twisted Sister Part One
great story, very nicely written!
A Sudden Occurrence
good story, but too fast. Break it up with paragraphs too, it will be easier to read. Maybe make another one with just those two, then get the mom in on the 3rd one.
A Week At My Aunt and Uncle's Part III
this is an amazing series. let me tell you, you hit the woman pleasuring a woman thing right on! cant wait for part four!
Summer's Night
Fantastic Story! Loved it! It made me so hot! Another chapter would be awesome! WOW!
Lusting for Christina
not too bad, nice little story, paragraphs would've made it much better and earier to read.
Sara's Time; Babysat
Nice job, keep up the good work, can't wait until the next one!
Cousin experimentation
Fantastic story. I loved it.
Icy Hot
Nice start, love the story. A continuation would be nice. Maybe a couple more encounters, and one after the parents come home would be interesting. Nice job. Looking foreword to the next one!
Icy Hot
Sorry, that should have been 5 stars!
My daughter ...A tale of a true slut
I liked it! I liked the way you wrote it with the thoughts and actual things people spoke in differnet ways, made it easy to follow. Wish you spent more time on the dad and the daughtor though, you spent a while setting it up, I wanna know more about th
naughty stepdaughter part 2
dream come true for any father.
Horny Sister
keep it up! Great Story!
The day my sister was home from school
not a bad story, some spelling and grammer errors which were a little more distracting. Maybe spend a little more time giving details, but other than that, great story, I wanna know more!
First time with daddy
no... please no.
Sweetest Sister Ever
I loved the story, can't wait to hear more!