bjcortland
Member Since October 19, 2009
Dreams of Holly Part 1
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Epicureus
5332 days ago
bjcortland
5556 days ago
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10
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I could feel the emotional turmoil of both characters, especially Laura. Descriptive without being overdone. You are a very gifted writer. Thanks.
Dreams of Holly Part 1
I could feel the emotional turmoil of both characters, especially Laura. Descriptive without being overdone. You are a very gifted writer. Thanks.
Megan and the Fishing Story
But when they do, wow! Great story! Looking forward to more of your work!
Twins and the Twelve Inch Cock
What a story! Definitely write part 2! Can't wait!
None of my stories here were posted by me. Because of SNAFUS with punctuation on the story side, I now only post my work in the forums. I don't know how they were posted here or by who, but it was not me. Because of this, I will be deleting all of my work here now as soon as I can.
BJ
BJ
Babysitting becomes interesting
A good story, although I found some parts a little hard to believe (how many times can sixteen year old cum?). Over all, though, well written and a great start to an intersting scenario. I'd love to hear what happens next. Keep going!