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Talant Member Since October 19, 2009
Valentine's Day Siblings by TheSophist 5070 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Very very good work, I hope there are more coming
Edward Nox part 1 by apex92 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Great job, keep them coming
The Delight of Amber by sik fuk 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Excellent story, cant wait to see more
Measuring My Cum Ch. 01 by crackjacka135 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Very good story, please continue
Finding fun with little sis by gainer13 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 8 + Pretty good story, just check some of the spelling errors and get to work on part 2
Wolf's First Time by Nemus_of_Scienta187 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 7 + Not bad, although it could have been a bit longer
Fleeting Moments: by Avan Snow 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 8 + Good start
Fleeting Moments (Pt. 2) by Avan Snow 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Part 3 please
Unbelieveable by chumpstain 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 6 + Its a good start, just think about maybe making it longer and a bit more descriptive
Naughty next door - 6 by steve6060 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 9 + Yet another very good story
The Snowstorm - Part I by Zack Hudson 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Very nice story, well written as well, keep up the good work
Naughty next door - The final move? by steve6060 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Why stop there? things could get very interesting
My First Time by chumpstain 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 4 + Ok, needs to be much longer and more descriptive
Motel Room by babalu 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 0 + this is garbage, learn to write a story properly, one paragraph is nothing, and check your spelling
Summer of 61 - chapter 2 by kwvagabond 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Very very nice, can't wait for part 3
Magic Cock by Liger 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 9 + Amusing and original, a sequel would be nice
Camping with the slutty scout by dobber01 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 6 + Not bad overall, just try extending it a bit more
The Start of a Beautiful Friendship, pt. 2: Secret Girlfriend by joe tells stories 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Another excellent story, keep up the good work
Memoirs of a Vampyr's Daughter by Nemus_of_Scienta187 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 9 + Very good start, nice work
Brother & Sister: Part 1 by world_refugee 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + I like it, good story, good grammar. Part 2 would be nice to have
The Engagement Test - Chapter 1 by RebelBelle 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Very nice
After School Practice by HazelEyes86 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + For a first post this is really well done, good to see someone doing decent work; keep it up
Ambers Anal Experience by Cobra1982 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 0 + Ok, generally not very good, way to short, bad grammar, and not really all that original
My fun with my sister by stanny 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + yeah, too short, your spelling is bad, and its just not original
A Little Rough Romance by red87 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + I agree with the previous message
Emily by pinkstaff 5071 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 7 + Not bad at all for a first story
Stocktaking by watchandtell 5281 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 7 + Not a bad story really, just try to make the next one a bit longer and a bit more descriptive in the sex scenes
Are You Afraid of the Dick? by Blackroses 5303 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 8 + Original and quite good, I hope to see more of your work
My sister and me by rekrap 5305 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 3 + wall of words, I have one word for you "paragraphs"
Matt and Suze... and Kerry: Part 3 by Chunks 5308 days ago
Talant 5543 days ago
- 10 + Brillliant series, some of the best stories I've read here for a long time. Keep up the good work