Morgen
Member Since May 12, 2010
Storm Child chapter 3
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Morgen
4824 days ago
Morgen
4814 days ago
Morgen
4824 days ago
Morgen
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Thank you very much, I certainly apprciate your indulgence. I also look forward to your next chapter, I very much enjoy your interpretation of Jenna and Daddy, and the fact that your great idea got me going on a similar tack.
A Boy and His Flashlight Chapter 10
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dandalk
dandalk
Send me a private message, and I'll explain the steps to post a story. It's worked everytime for me, and I just helped someone else publish their very first story, be glad to help!
All I want for Christmas
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goofy
goofy
A very good first story. I enjoyed it a lot, and am looking forward to more stories, you have a good touch, and if your first story is any indication, you'll have a steady reader here.
My Wish is Their Command Chapter 1
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dandalk
dandalk
Hey Dandalk, that's pretty much the way I write too. My Daughter's sexy sight series just seemed to flow, one right after the other. When I'm writing, I'm judging whether it's a one time, stand alone story, or whether I can stretch it out. If I decide to run a series, I start to put in things, like other lideas that the characters have, and build on those ideas for the next story in the series. I like to have 2 or 3 different stories to work on at the same time, if I get stuck on one, I can work on the other two, and usually, the break will recharge my ideas for the one that's going slow.
Parents teach their daughter part 14
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Morgen
Morgen
Don'r be afraid, jump in. We'd like to get a look, we welcome new authors, with new stories. I really like sci-fi stories, and I have published 4 sci-fi themed stories, that have well received. So, jump in, and publish, it's great.
The South Marlin Circle Bondage Club Chapter 30
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anonymous
anonymous
Hey moderators, 66 pages of Russian spam garbage. Bomb them, please, blow these spam fuckers right off the sight. Let's get back our stories, and kick the spam fuckers out.
Molly gets her cherry plucked part 2
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anonymous
anonymous
Moderators, please delete this story. I had trouble posting this earlier, it posted as anonymous instead of Morgen, I have reposted this story under my ID.
The Surrogate
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MotherTabitha
MotherTabitha
First off, you need more paragraphs. As a rule of thumb, when one character speaks, that's a paragraph. When you go back to narration, another paragraph. When a second character speaks, another paragraph, and so on.
Next up, when you have the story ready to go, put it into spell checker, to catch any misspellings. It doesn't matter how careful you are, I've caught so many lots of errors on my stories before I post them.
Next up, when you have the story ready to go, put it into spell checker, to catch any misspellings. It doesn't matter how careful you are, I've caught so many lots of errors on my stories before I post them.
Mrs. Listen, Part 2
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yeahlyfsgood
yeahlyfsgood
Love the part about Mary Lou Retton, what an amzing body. Watching her balancing on the beam, made me wish I could see, and feel her balancing on my cock.
Meet the Bartlett's: Part One: The Sister-In-Law
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rbartlett
rbartlett
Very hot, that's the kind of thing I wish I could do to my sister in law. Looking forward to more!
Daddy's surprise
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Spencer84
Spencer84
Unfortunately, too many times. I also ingnore stories like this, too much trouble to read.
It shouldn't have happened but it did
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klm0559
klm0559
It's a good first story, but please use paragraphs, and drag the suspense out a bit, I am one of the ones that likes some build up, to heighten the anticipation. I look forward to you next contribution!
a day in the park
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Trentoncook3
Trentoncook3
No suspense, no build up, just a laundry list of here's what we did. Too many commas, not enough sentences.
Storm Child chapter 2, Clear Skies
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Oedipusrex73
Oedipusrex73
Oh yes, an excellent sequel. Looking forward to chapter 3, well done!
Storm Child chapter 2, Clear Skies
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Oedipusrex73
Oedipusrex73
Morgen here, and thank you for the compliment. The system does that, I don't know if it's a recurring glitch, but the best way to handle it is to try about 2 or 3 times a day, to post it. The glitch comes and goes, and eventually, you will hit a patch where it will allow new stories to be posted. I have had about 5 or 6 stories that I posted, that took a while, due to the dreaded "Wrong step" error message. And, make sure to save a copy of your story, so it can easily be tried again. Good luck!
Curious Kayla gets to see part 3
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Morgen
Morgen
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