
IRONEAGLE2
Member Since November 02, 2009
A Daughter Steps In
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hrnydadinnc
5107 days ago
IRONEAGLE2
5108 days ago


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great continue
A Daughter Steps In
it gets bettr everytime i read it god i need some now
First taste of forbiden fruit, chapter 2
great cant wait to read part three
Sarah and I. Part 2
great part 2 as well continue
Couldn't Hold It Any Longer
ya i agree not a bad start you need to keep going
Inside Me: C12
great ending but wish there was more
Inside Me: C01
great start keep it cumming
Jillicious - The Beginning.
GREAT START WHAT NEXT
My Cute Little Sister
cant read it needs to redone in english
My Little Sis!
great start continue
Noc 2
great will there be a part three
My Young Tutor
cute
Throwaway Child: A Love Story
great so fare please write more
Dave and Emily Pt.1
all that is is an intro not a bad intro but no story
A Gift I Never Wanted (The Beginning)
so fare so good
Christmas with my sister
great continue please
A different birthday present...
great start continue
Alex & Angela
great so fare continue please
Younger Sister
hard to read learn english before you write a story
I didn't expect to lose it (long, first time)
great continue dont stop there
Thunderfucked
short but good
The Den
continue
my little life 1
not abad start
Me My Mum And A fucking wild Year
yes more please
An Expatriates Young Love (Chap 4)
not a bad start needs more detail and less spainish to english tranlation try useing just english but over all not bad
Clubhouse in the woods
grammer spelling periods . needs work in thoughs areas but an ok start
The Stepford Children
not bad continue
Amish Devil's Ohio
rewrite the story redo all the grammer
A BABYSITTERS TALE, IX WHAT ABOUT KATIE?
nice no sex but still pretty good
A BABYSITTERS TALE, VII REVENGE
good revenge chapter