DebbieX_
Member Since October 18, 2009
Double Dogged
The story if on can call it that actually SUCKS. How the hell do you think a dog can get his cock in to you when you're supposed to be lying on your stomach also both you and the dog must be seriously deformed if he can get his knot in to your womb.
Lear
Lear
Landlord Shares
A nice twist would be for her to get Buck to fuck the landlord while she takes pictures.
my first time with blackie
What animal were you supposed to get, a tan pig or what?
Need to Tell Someone
By the way you wrote your story I'd have to guess that English is your second language. Your story might be a good one but fot the fact that you even start with something weird.
You used "Are town" instad of Our town. Even non English speaking people kno
You used "Are town" instad of Our town. Even non English speaking people kno
Aunt Sarah
What ever happened to the grammar. It makes for very poor reading if one can stay focused long enough.
Black lover,s
If you're going to post in ENGLISH do learn to speak it. Your story was absolute CRAP!
Amanda gave me the shaft.
What's a mirrow?
The story might have been good had it not been for some of the worst grammar ever published on the net.
The story might have been good had it not been for some of the worst grammar ever published on the net.
The snow storm
I loved your story.
It makes me jealous I don't have a son of age that i can do it with too
It makes me jealous I don't have a son of age that i can do it with too
Kates busy day!
Thank you for sharing.
A wonderful start and a continuation would be greatly apreciated.
A wonderful start and a continuation would be greatly apreciated.
Dog's Bitch and her Neighbor
I love your stories, they're all great, and this one's no exception.
It's got me dripping wet.
Thank you
It's got me dripping wet.
Thank you
Sweet Paige
I just loved your story and hope there's a sequel to it.
No Other Choice Pt 3
That was the worst crap I've ever read on here.
Don't you have a clue how to write . There are Capital letters, punctuation marks and even simple things like paragraphs.
Best you can do for the rest of us is give up writing stories!
Don't you have a clue how to write . There are Capital letters, punctuation marks and even simple things like paragraphs.
Best you can do for the rest of us is give up writing stories!
my mom and the babysitter
What kind of a DumbFuck are you?
Do you honestly think anyone in the world wants to read a solid block of absolute crap.
You obviously can't write for shit and desperately need to go back to school to learn the basics of writing.
Do you honestly think anyone in the world wants to read a solid block of absolute crap.
You obviously can't write for shit and desperately need to go back to school to learn the basics of writing.
Tammy and Dave
I think a trip back to grade 1 would be of some benefit. You realy need to leard to use capital letters and punctuation marks.
Poker and dad
What the hell is that crap you publiched. You frickin'computer has Spell and Grammar Check. Why not USE IT?
My Sister and I at the beach
It was a complete waste of time reading this shit. I has to amongst the worst crap to be found on the net.
My second mom, an amazing woman!
The story has nothing to do with incest and should have been posted in the cheating section, still it is a great story and am looking forward to the next one.
My Girlfriend's Mom
It's a good story and I liked it but I'm left wondering why it's in the Incest category instad of Cheating.
My Girlfriend's Mom
I didn't realize that it was in the correct category as i was reding your other story, The True Story of How I Banged My Sister.
Skating Rink 4
I loved your story, well writen and i loved the way David was paid back for being an asshole.
Shame April didn't get hers too
Shame April didn't get hers too
One Hot Afternoon
Rhian, Thank you so much for another HOT story. Hope you will soon find the courage to see Susan again
My first time with my big boy
I agree. It was good but rather short. Sadly it was also a block of words.
Claimed by Ben
Thanks for all your comments. I have been thinking about more stories and the encouragements do help.
Forbidden fruit
Nice story to read it was making me wet start to finish. Did he end up knocking you up after cumming in you and did hubby ever find out?
Mountain Vacation
Great story, thanks. Lookin forward to more.
A real bag boy
Nice story. Thank you
Persuading Shy Mom to Pose PT. 2
A very hot part two. Hope you'll continue with more escapades with mom and her friend.
impregnated by a black men
What ever happened to your Spell Check. As it is you look illiterate. Also, where are the pictures?
summer dog
A wonderful story. Hope there will be more escapades on your walks with Rex.
Try reading some of the stories posted and get some idea of what a story is supposed to be like.