cmbench
Member Since October 19, 2009
Swimming Time With Sister
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aabbdd112233
5102 days ago
cmbench
5574 days ago
aabbdd112233
5102 days ago
cmbench
5574 days ago
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Best ending ever on this site!
My sister
by
study123
study123
Aaaaaaa! You were doing great until you got to the pool part, at which point it seemed like you were in a rush to finish the story.
Revise and extend it, starting with the pool part, then re-submit it.
Revise and extend it, starting with the pool part, then re-submit it.
My Girlfriend's Mom
by
gigolo71
gigolo71
Well done. Not groundbreaking, yet still, an attention grabbing story.