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brina Member Since October 19, 2009
First Night--part 1
brina 5543 days ago
- 8 + I wanna see more!
Mary's Bad Day
brina 5543 days ago
- 8 + Hi Nikki_Cherry! well, it seems your writing-cherry was popped:))) and i must say the story is terrific for a virgin writer like yourself!

i loved the exposion and humiliation and abuse. the woman was slightly bothering me and there was not as much act
If you go down to the woods today, beware of a big surprise...
brina 5543 days ago
- 6 + the story wasn't bad. though extremely short. it needs more details, description, character development. the girl should have struggled. she would feel scared, deeply ashamed and embarassed at the torture and domination and the extreme exposure. Add dirty
Hand in the Darkness
brina 5543 days ago
- 6 + that's one hell of a cliffhanger! i wanna see part 2. make it really long and detailed please. humiliate and embarass the girl. make her scared and ashamed.

I can't wait!!!
Charlenes Destiny
brina 5543 days ago
- 8 + although i was a bit disappointed. i was expecting more of the initiation. cutting her arm was absolutely unnecessary and the guy didn't do anything to her. he just walked away and left a couple of guys with her. the initiation should have been humiliatin