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boundless27 Member Since October 19, 2009
Daddy Takes What He Wants Part 1 by BABY G 5155 days ago
boundless27 5627 days ago
- 4 + the basic story is really good. but the way it was written just stinks. Everything is jumpled together and a lot of badly misspelled words. It's like someone telling a story in a huge rush without pausing to take a breath.