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blueeyes381968 Member Since October 19, 2009
Trampoline Flasher by petookh 5134 days ago
blueeyes381968 5108 days ago
- 0 + As above, a good story with potential, but the lack of paragraphs etc made it difficult to read and enjoy. Still keep trying, have a go at rewriting it.
Kidnapped by Anudis90 5134 days ago
blueeyes381968 5606 days ago
- 2 + First, there does seem to be a big problem with formating, you add text, it looks great, and when it appears, its all over the place. It is particularly bad at removing all paragraphs.

Second, there are a lot of wanker out there, who lacking the imagi