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My threesome with my sister by

Magnificent1 5134 days ago

bluedragon2900 5606 days ago

- 2 + You have a great idea, just fill it out...add more context! Add storyline before and after...expand! It's not bad, just needs some beefing up.

Home alone by

lo 5134 days ago

bluedragon2900 5606 days ago

- 1 + I red this storie, thout it suked, postid this revew. Seriously, might be the worst thing...ever.

The Wedding Night I Won't Ever Forget by

BONDAGE 5134 days ago

bluedragon2900 5606 days ago

- 2 + do they not have schools in Cheasapeake Virginia?

Ice Machine by

Twags59 5134 days ago

bluedragon2900 5606 days ago

- 3 + eh...not much of a plot...pretty poorly written (only one paragraph). Good concepts, but could use a rewrite.