bluedragon2900
Member Since October 19, 2009
My threesome with my sister
by
Magnificent1
5071 days ago
bluedragon2900
5543 days ago
Magnificent1
5071 days ago
bluedragon2900
5543 days ago
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You have a great idea, just fill it out...add more context! Add storyline before and after...expand! It's not bad, just needs some beefing up.
Home alone
by
lo
lo
I red this storie, thout it suked, postid this revew. Seriously, might be the worst thing...ever.
Ice Machine
by
Twags59
Twags59
eh...not much of a plot...pretty poorly written (only one paragraph). Good concepts, but could use a rewrite.