bluebeard
Member Since July 16, 2011
The Castle... Part 1
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Nastyman
Nastyman
Wow, what a story! Starting from the portrayal of Jackie as the demure lady of elite class, her swift but smooth conversion to a slut, the flow of the story is superb. The use of words is impeccable. 'Penis' instead of 'cock', 'vagina' instead of 'cunt', for instance, shows that you know precisely which word goes where! The descriptions, the consistent plot-weaving and creating of characters.. in fact, everything about this story spells craftsmanship. The bestial climax is a terrific finale. A creation with real class.
son fucking his mother suma with tha help of his father part 1
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anonymous
anonymous
Hi, I think this is a repetition. I already commented in the other post.
kerala son fucking mother part 1
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anonymous
anonymous
Hi,
Though the English is simple, it really brings out the story in a natural way - it sounds very real. If it really happened, accept my congrats. The father helping out is a very hot angle to the story! I really hope it was not the last time with your mother. I hope you continue to write your experiences.
Though the English is simple, it really brings out the story in a natural way - it sounds very real. If it really happened, accept my congrats. The father helping out is a very hot angle to the story! I really hope it was not the last time with your mother. I hope you continue to write your experiences.
Milly inseminated
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Enteme
Enteme
Hi,
It's a damn nice angle! And very well written out. I hope to see the continuation where the actual 'procedure' is described in detail...
It's a damn nice angle! And very well written out. I hope to see the continuation where the actual 'procedure' is described in detail...
Personal Services Pt. 1
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jjonah
jjonah
Superb start! Damn realistic, and the pace is very natural. Absolutely enjoyable story.
Cherry Hill riding club part 4
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Morgen
Morgen
Fantastic story! The start was perfect, with mom's peeping and pumping, and this story-telling part is the best I've read.
Subject 9
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Erica362436
Erica362436
It's a really great story, man! And written in a smooth style - very realistic. Please write the continuation soon...
Indian Baba Sex story
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SGPrinz
SGPrinz
Baba stories always arouse! This is a nice story, but it would have been much more nice if it was longer, with more details and so on. If you described her some more, with more details of the way she became sexually aroused, the story will be a real hit!
What you say about illiteracy and superstition is very true - many women actually become victims to such god-men and other exploiters. I have read news of such happenings many times. But then, men too have their frustrations - for example, that is the reason I got aroused by your story...
I hope you write another story! Perhaps, continue the saga of the baba with other women...
What you say about illiteracy and superstition is very true - many women actually become victims to such god-men and other exploiters. I have read news of such happenings many times. But then, men too have their frustrations - for example, that is the reason I got aroused by your story...
I hope you write another story! Perhaps, continue the saga of the baba with other women...
The Kingdom of Fuck
by
glitter_fantastic
glitter_fantastic
Great story line, but difficult to read. Would have been much more readable if you had split it into paragraphs.
The Raid on Kadhir Pets
by
bluebeard
bluebeard
Thanks to Wolfgirl20 and ilovehorsesex145 for expressing your opinions.
I agree, I tried to put the details as clearly as I saw in my mind's eye. I know, some readers would like to 'make up' part of the story in their own minds (gives a custom edge), but I belong to the sort that like to visualize the scene and that's why I put in the finer details. I usually like the stories that create a full image as I read them. In that angle, I share WolfGirl20's sentiments.
Thanks WoflGirl, for such an encouraging remark!
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I agree, I tried to put the details as clearly as I saw in my mind's eye. I know, some readers would like to 'make up' part of the story in their own minds (gives a custom edge), but I belong to the sort that like to visualize the scene and that's why I put in the finer details. I usually like the stories that create a full image as I read them. In that angle, I share WolfGirl20's sentiments.
Thanks WoflGirl, for such an encouraging remark!
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In the Doghouse, pt. 1
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jjonah
jjonah
God, what a story! Too damn well written. What makes it special is the rare animal-rape theme. Excellent stuf, I hope you have a continuation.
Animal Lovers Part 1
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WolfGirl20
WolfGirl20
It's an ingenious plot, with the veterinary hospital setting! Nice going, the writing flow is very realistic.
Animal Lovers Part 2
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WolfGirl20
WolfGirl20
Very nicely written. The natural speed and flow, the descriptive style, makes it a very realistic story.
Is it also possible that you can fuck your mother along with your father? That would be real hot!
Wish you lots of sex!