
bakerman
Member Since October 19, 2009
Emma: The Wife's Story
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redink
5215 days ago
bakerman
5686 days ago


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I enjoyed this story. Can't wait for more. Keep at it.
My Little Sister
Well this was a good idea that just died. I'd write more but I'm tired from reading this crap.
Office Lunch
Good idea. Keep working on it. Be a bit more descriptive in the sex.
Me and my Hot Neighbor
I should'a hunged up on this story. I thought he'd get the Mom but the 12 year old with hooters this was indeed a fantasy.
Dizzy Mrs Lizzie
A few thousand reads and no one has left a comment. If you liked it leave a message. If you didn't like it tell me why.
Fucked by James
I nearly didn't read it because it was one long paragraph.
Some good ideas in the story.
You have to spave and pace your story.
Set up the scene and then expand on the sex.
Some good ideas in the story.
You have to spave and pace your story.
Set up the scene and then expand on the sex.
Fucked by James
I nearly didn't read it because it was one long paragraph.
Some good ideas in the story.
You have to space and pace your story.
Set up the scene and then expand on the sex.
Some good ideas in the story.
You have to space and pace your story.
Set up the scene and then expand on the sex.
Mom, Aunt, and Me Have Some Intoxicated Fun
A good idea for a story. Sex a bit rushed. Would read next chapter. Keep writing
Hard and Fast
Good, but not quite there. Top story idea but it seemed a bit pushed.
Son in Law
It sure was a hot story but if went off the boil too soon.
Anonymous Encounter
Awsome story. Keep it up.
Making Out With Mom
Excellent story. Best I've read here in a while. Keep it up. I can't wait till the next adventure.
My First Huge Dick
Hot story but needs the sex scenes a bit longer and discriptive.
Lustful Mother
That was hot. Keep writing can't wait for more. Mom and Jackie tag teaming it.
My Husband's Bachelor Party
Super story. Great sex, not rushed and well written. Can't wait to read the wedding night.