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azerus26 Member Since October 19, 2009
Lusting for Christina
azerus26 5449 days ago
- 5 + could havebeen better, good story line, but the paragraphs should have been separated. and you should have left it open for a sequil.
The wrong time to come home
azerus26 5449 days ago
- 10 + good stroy line, but your grammer needs work