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My first time by

vixiexynne 5070 days ago

aurora 5542 days ago

- 6 + The actual act description was short. Tell more next time about how you felt. There had to have been pain and a little fear at least. All in all it was pretty good. Next time be more exact and yes I said next time. Keep writing stories, you have potential

Special Connecton by

Superstud 5071 days ago

aurora 5542 days ago

- 6 + This would be a great story if you would lengthen it. You could have easily stretched it into several chapters. You have the bare bones there but try to flesh it out more. By the time you were really into it the story was over. But it was pretty good.

Banged by Buster by

pasego 5071 days ago

aurora 5542 days ago

- 6 + it was short and to the point. a little more detail would have been nice though.

Saved from a death worse than fate..... by

geode 5071 days ago

aurora 5542 days ago

- 6 + I said I would never read this story for you see, I am Geode's wife. And this story is based upon a real incident that happened to him before we met. I've read this story twice now. The first time I was emotional and couldn't read very well but now I have

DOING THE DOBERMANS by

TINY WALDO 5071 days ago

aurora 5542 days ago

- 0 + I have always been polite when I encounter a story that needs a little work as I am a new author and have not yet perfected my skills either. But as I can not call this monstrosity a story, as it barely can be said to have words, just a mass of garbled le

All Alone In The Country Home - ( PART ONE ) by

Thy SEXtremist 5071 days ago

aurora 5542 days ago

- 10 + As everybody that has seen me on here knows, I hate to be mean. But this story was really awful. Sure we all like fantasy but a little reality is called for you know. I wont point out all its flaws but there were many. Try reading more stories on here to

First time with daddy by

wyldewynd 5071 days ago

aurora 5542 days ago

- 10 + This is the first story I have read on here that totally turned me off. Talk about a mood killer! Please, do us all a favor and don't write the sequel. Totally unreal, horrible spelling, are you even old enough to be on this site little girl?

MY wifes bitch by

NCbarno007 5071 days ago

aurora 5542 days ago

- 0 + I tried to read this "story", and I say that loosely, but it was too confusing. You write as if you are in a chat room. There is little setup to the storyline. And it doesn't seem to fit into this catagory. Maybe you should clean the format up and resubm

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