asiaticus
Member Since October 19, 2009
Robby's Mom
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daj1
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asiaticus
5542 days ago
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One of the best.
Creamfields
Needs an edit in several places, ie.. What is "Russeling off"? Using the replace function can be a dangerous thing. Changing Jack to Russel had unintended consequenses I thnk. :^)
Don't Get Me Wrong
..Please put in paragraphs so its more readable.
The Hunt (Part two)
Up to you usual fine standard.
My brother's friend
Clean up the spelling before submitting. Its a distraction to an otherwise ok story
A Mother's Solution
Good.
Going Natural
Good but a little short on development