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Swimming Time With Sister
amani 5542 days ago
- 8 + But don't rush your story. Develop it more and be sure to write parts 2-4. The sister is a sneaky one.
my prayer to You
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + sounds like a truely addicted slut. are you really female?
Touch me, Mommy
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Excellent story. Please write and post parts 2 and 3. I think your story makes some valid points.
not my husband's child
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Really good story. I imagine this happens to many women.
Fucking in my Family
amani 5542 days ago
- 7 + These stories are good on the base, but you got to flush them out. Add more detail. Use paragraphs,etc. Send me a message if you want some help doing that.
Giving in to Temptation, part 2 (sequel to Things that Go Bump in the Night)
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Mmmm thanks for writing part 2. It's perverted, but damn, it's hot. Just shows how gotta be careful around young panties. Could get us real trouble. Part 3?
Dear Sadie
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + A very parts are little rushed, but understand it's from the young character's pov. keep writing.
The store room desk
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Damn this and part 2 are so nasty. So develish. Guys, don't let this give you ideas. It's only a story. But oh sooo nasty. I must go cum again.
I want some chocolate
amani 5542 days ago
- 8 + A very loving story. Needs editing--spelling, but overall it seems very honest and loving. I would love to be Brandon.
my new obsession
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Like it too, especially when you said he was fucking you like girl. Add a part two.
Outside The Curriculum: Learning Made Easy
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Very hot. Especially the part where you said you wanted to spread your legs again.
A Family Affair (part one)
amani 5542 days ago
- 0 + The kids are little young for this story, but I guess that's why it's taboo. Keep writing. Add more to the build up. By the way guys, this is just a start. Please don't let it cause to cross the line. It's very dangerous terroirty.
The Discovery
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Yes, keep writing. Very hot.
Father, Forgive Me For I Have Sinned
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Mmmm I don't know what it si about these kind of stories that are such a turn on. This one is hot. I hope there's more coming. Guys, remember, it's only a story. Don't cause this to make you cross the line. It's very dangerous terrotory.
Things That Go Bump in the Night
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + I came sooo good reading this story last night. I know the girl is too young, but just way the father seduces her got me so hot. And those little things he says (daddy needst to feel our cum mixing together) or thinks make it even hotter.

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Things That Go Bump in the Night
amani 5542 days ago
- 0 + Please write some more stories like this or a part II and III.
Giving in to Temptation, part 1
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + I think you printed it before. Hope you write a part two.
My best friend Amy pt.2
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + keep writing. add dialgoue too.
Angel Alice 2: The Start of Something Beautiful
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Look forward to chapter 3
Making Out With Mom
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Love how kinky the mom is.
Alice Part 2
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + But don't rush them.
My Girlfriends Daughter
amani 5542 days ago
- 9 + Seriously well done. Keep writing.
New House with Dad
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + please write more. don't take too long.
Tasting Candi
amani 5542 days ago
- 9 + Keep writing. I have a feeling little girl is going to be a mommy sooner than she thinks.
Grandfather Needs Cynthia (part 2)
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + Mmmm she's a really good fuck even for fiction.
Grandfather Needs Cynthia (part 1)
amani 5542 days ago
- 10 + But just want to remind male readers that this only fiction. Be careful about it influncing you to cross the line. Plus, a 9yro cannot take a cock in her pussy like this fictional girl does. Remember that.