akaCurly
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Girl Down The Street
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pusshunter
5071 days ago
akaCurly
5543 days ago
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So where is the sequel? Soon, I hope.
The Girl Down The Street Part 3
Excellent start on a series. More, please.
Schoolgirl
Good "grabber" start. U have your audience, now develop characters and events more fully. Add more details as story develops.