afternightpersonality
Member Since October 19, 2009
Three little words, but not the ones you think
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R-Tuned
5070 days ago
afternightpersonality
5542 days ago
R-Tuned
5070 days ago
afternightpersonality
5542 days ago
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Thanks! It's my first, but definitely not my last. I have also written one called "The Four Senses" and one called "I want you." Check them out! :)
The girl in locker 171-30
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johnny123
johnny123
This is really not too bad. There are a couple of grammatical things here and there, but those are easily fixed. I think the main problem I had was when you mentioned mom running a bath. The story subject sounds plenty old enough to take a shower all by h
A Quick Shower Scene
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red87
red87
This was nice. It's great to read something from someone who has decent grammar skills. Some more postings would be nice! :)