abooey
Member Since October 19, 2009
INNOCENT ANGLE(PART1)
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noori03
5071 days ago
abooey
5542 days ago
noori03
5071 days ago
abooey
5542 days ago
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Is the title character really named ANGLE? Or is she named ANGEL? You can't be that stupid can you?
Husband's whore
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SWEETCHEEKSSWEETSTUFF
SWEETCHEEKSSWEETSTUFF
Does anyone check these stories before they are posted? This is obviously just and advertisment.
Was it love or just sex?
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MissSerious
MissSerious
I really hopw english is not your first language. Your grammar and spelling is awful and the story is completely unbelievable. A 42DD 13 year old?? was this girl 5'3" and 350lbs?
Was it love or just sex?
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MissSerious
MissSerious
Misspelling I can deal with, although I haven't seen a computer without spell check in at least 10 years. Poor grammar and poor sentence structure I can't deal with. Not to mention the story itself was uninteresting. Did you finish high school or did y
My daughter ...A tale of a true slut
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HungStud
HungStud
Is English your native language? I really hope not. Your story was pretty good, but you have got to learn how to spell and use punctuation.
The day my sister was home from school
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freaky4fun
freaky4fun
Decent story. But doesn't your computer have a spell check and grammar check?
First time with daddy
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wyldewynd
wyldewynd
ya know, there is such a thing as spell check and grammar check. Just dreadful.
carolyn's hot boyfriend
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ilovecarolyn
ilovecarolyn
Now, that's what I like. a short concise story that isn't even remotely erotic. I hope it didn't take too long to write John Grisham
middle school slut
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jeffal
jeffal
Good story, but that was some of the worst use of grammar i've ever seen. You know your computer probably has a spell check too.