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I was supposed to be baby sitting
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davidj
5071 days ago
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5542 days ago
davidj
5071 days ago
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5542 days ago
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good story, but the spelling, grammar, and formatting were trocious. Go back to 5th grade.
A Tropical Cruze Gone BAD
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johnny123
johnny123
You had a good premise for a story, and that's about it. This story was rushed, unbeliveable, and had more spelling errors than i can count on my hands
The Three gals and myself.
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Juicyiceman
Juicyiceman
Learn subject/verb agreement and learn to keep your tenses consistent