Zell289
Member Since October 19, 2009
Me and Nicole
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loverfromchitown12
5071 days ago
Zell289
5543 days ago
loverfromchitown12
5071 days ago
Zell289
5543 days ago
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Hey dude, a bit more description on age etc would have been nice, not bad story. Enjoyed, looking forward to part 2
16 yr old son has fun with mum
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lachie90
lachie90
Nice start dude, could use a little more build up and description and possibly not so rushed towards the end.
Nice work for your first story dude, dont stop now, you're on a roll
Nice work for your first story dude, dont stop now, you're on a roll
Beautifil
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babykaitfish1987
babykaitfish1987
Dude thats a good story, really pleased at how that was done. Well set out, well thought out, good punctuation, descent paragraphs. Really neatly done dude. Keep it up and hope to see more in the future from you