Youngstuff
Member Since October 19, 2009
Lisa
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heater
5070 days ago
Youngstuff
5542 days ago
heater
5070 days ago
Youngstuff
5542 days ago
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Good story angle but where did this relationship come from. You need to develop your story more and slow down. Have the fun of catching the youngstuff is in the chase. Work her into wanting the sex and then go slower with many more details of emtion and s
Bomb Shelter Bondage - Part 1: Planning the perfect kidnapping
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elkhartgreg
elkhartgreg
Great beginning EHG! It is necessary to set the stage for a delicious and hot story. Most writers don't accomplish that very well and thus their story loses some of its flavor. You have described the " love chamber" very well, in fact we can almost see it
Lucky Stone pt 8
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bakerman
bakerman
Enjoyed the story! Well written and paced. I like the way father and son share "quality time". Keep up the good work, include more young prey!
Father-Daughter Affair 7 (The Family Pussy)
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Youngstuff
Youngstuff
Readers,
I apologize for this SCREWED double posting which is still not the way it was originally submitted. I think it is time to start posting elsewhere as many of you have wrote and told me. I appreciate my loyal readers for it is you that try to
I apologize for this SCREWED double posting which is still not the way it was originally submitted. I think it is time to start posting elsewhere as many of you have wrote and told me. I appreciate my loyal readers for it is you that try to
A Cute Cop Is Cuffed
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DARK CLOUD
DARK CLOUD
Not bad. New and different angle. Not a bad job at all. Just all happened a little too quick. Why not go back and make the woman serve as a cop by day and a prostitute or a "for criminals only" call-girl by night.
A Cute Cop Is Cuffed
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DARK CLOUD
DARK CLOUD
Not bad. New and different angle. Not a bad job at all. Just all happened a little too quick. Why not go back and make the woman serve as a cop by day and a prostitute or a "for criminals only" call-girl by night.
A Cute Cop Is Cuffed
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DARK CLOUD
DARK CLOUD
Not bad. New and different angle. Not a bad job at all. Just all happened a little too quick. Why not go back and make the woman serve as a cop by day and a prostitute or a "for criminals only" call-girl by night.
Easy Pickings
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babymaker
babymaker
Sorry my friend but this idea had such potential and yet the only blow-job here was the blown opportunity. This sucked!
Easy Pickings
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babymaker
babymaker
Sorry my friend but this idea had such potential and yet the only blow-job here was the blown opportunity. This sucked!
Niece's First Love
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reeb
reeb
Very, very nice. I love your work. It's a pleasure to read some writers material. Thanks!
Maria's Cumming Out II
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Youngstuff
Youngstuff
Ben,
I just wanted to thank you personally for your marvelous comment, I love IT! Everyone does have a right to their opinion and I do not worry about it. I want to apologize to all readers because the story was posted with the fourth paragraph bei
I just wanted to thank you personally for your marvelous comment, I love IT! Everyone does have a right to their opinion and I do not worry about it. I want to apologize to all readers because the story was posted with the fourth paragraph bei
15 Year Old Melissa's Rape
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TheMan69
TheMan69
Hey...you did a great job on the story. Hope to read more about Melissa partying soon. Take your time with the sex and be more graphic/ descriptive of Meliissa and how she gets it.
Of course you know brother deserves some too but his should be real spec
Of course you know brother deserves some too but his should be real spec
One Way Ticket To Hell
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Peter_Pan
Peter_Pan
Great Job! Super Story. I really loved it but felt it could have had a little more "play time" to it. I did hate the ending though...you could have had so much more material to write here. Maybe she can make conjugal visits...HA!
Harper Valley Revisited – Part 2 – The Party
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Janet2
Janet2
Superb job girl! You compliment PAN very well. You have a gift and should use it more! Thanks.
Dustin
Dustin