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Crystal by LLJOICE3 5293 days ago
WMSpearshaker 5687 days ago
- 8 + Respectable first story, Crystal. I did notice a few grammatical errors and some misused words, as in this sentence, "My father on the other hand was a crook who worked for the mafia until he sold a lot of money from them."

I think you meant to write st