Sphenix
Member Since October 19, 2009
Cousins compare
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Vaughan
5082 days ago
Sphenix
5554 days ago
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You need way more detail! That is what makes a good story. It was like reading a summary. Try not to make it sound so......obvious? PROOF READ too. Good try.
my best friends sister
This should not even have been posted!
Valentine's Day
Great story line. Good Detail. Write More.