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Sphenix Member Since October 19, 2009
Cousins compare
Sphenix 5554 days ago
- 6 + You need way more detail! That is what makes a good story. It was like reading a summary. Try not to make it sound so......obvious? PROOF READ too. Good try.
my best friends sister
Sphenix 5554 days ago
- 10 + This should not even have been posted!
Valentine's Day
Sphenix 5554 days ago
- 0 + Great story line. Good Detail. Write More.