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Creamfields
Slizarus 5542 days ago
- 5 + It reminded me a great deal of the world of Clockwork Orange.. most specifically the dialect.. how it sounds, how it's written.. how things are described..

Reminds me of British erotica and stories..

It's really quite good, I enjoyed it emphatically.
Stranger
Slizarus 5542 days ago
- 10 + Extremely sexy... I loved it *laugh*

The greatest part?

My name is James..

And I wonder about it, would be an interesting thing to act out :)

Please post more!
My redheaded neighbor
Slizarus 5542 days ago
- 8 + I certainly enjoyed it, though there were multiple mistakes in spelling and grammar. Also a note, more detail in the actual sex scene.. Continue writing, this could be intriguing
Chocolate Cinnamon (Revisited)
Slizarus 5542 days ago
- 10 + Very cool, Great detail.. the grammar was.. eh, it didn't seem quite right but neither is mine most of the time.. Very sexy, erotic, I could almost envy you :)
My Big Sister
Slizarus 5542 days ago
- 10 + I've actually read a few of your stories before, didn't notice the same person wrote them :) I want more of this!! I have a thing for girls with huge tits and muscle (visible or occult) soo.. please? :)