SilverxMoon
Member Since October 19, 2009
Purgatory Games, Part Two
by
MarkJames
5071 days ago
SilverxMoon
5542 days ago
MarkJames
5071 days ago
SilverxMoon
5542 days ago
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10
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-purrs- I love this story and I hope that I get to see more of your writing as it is amazing. I'll be on the look out for anything more you right.
Rude Awakening
by
valechan
valechan
It was a well written story, although if you are going to write more I do say there should be some more conflict in it. Like the little brother starting to like it. (more for the humiliation value than anything) all in all I think this was interesting,
Haunted Mirror 2
by
K.Teal
K.Teal
Great storyline and the writing was wounderful. Just work on formatting a little bit. I could read it fine but you should try and get paragraphs in there so it appears nicer.
gay vampire
by
johnnie
johnnie
I have to say that this is better than alot of the stuff that I have read in this section. Only a few problems.
First of all....never use the word tummy in something like this. It makes it sound horrible childish. Also words that you use that are si
First of all....never use the word tummy in something like this. It makes it sound horrible childish. Also words that you use that are si
Finola
by
kyooko
kyooko
This was amazing. I have to say that it was greatly enhanced by your vocabulary that so many of the stories lack. Also you took your time so it seems to the story is very well done. -claps- I will have to be on the look out for more things from you. ^^
The Prize
by
jezlady
jezlady
It was a good story, really well writen. However it did remind me of this book I once read.
Prison Break&the Storm
by
LustyLee77
LustyLee77
I couldn't even read through the whole thing. I twas too set up and everything was corny and sounded scripted.
Silken Chains Part Three
by
TwistedDemise
TwistedDemise
Wonderfully amazing. Great detail for the most part and nicely written. I have to say the way the characters are give even more to the story.