SilkyBitch
Member Since December 06, 2011
School of sex Series Ep.1
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LikeABoss
4683 days ago
SilkyBitch
4680 days ago
LikeABoss
4683 days ago
SilkyBitch
4680 days ago
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boring. It does no good as a story if you just jump into the sex. Build up to it. Also, I agree that you hve no pragraphs and too many exclamation points
a night at the Vet pt. 4, (revised)
by
SilkyBitch
SilkyBitch
it's under animal category. You have to look at the titles carefully while skimming downward
a night at the Vet - pt 4 of 4
by
usafslut1
usafslut1
Hon, not to pick your lovely story apart or anything, but delete the entire part that starts with her dreaming of being ordered to suck cock by the assisstant. Try making it longer where the dogs continue fucking her until her mother realizes something is wrong and goes to get her. Upon arrival, she'll find her daughter in the kennal being pounded by the Dane and want her saved, yet by this time her daughter's mind is only that of a bitch dog and even saved, she'll refuse all clothing except a collar and leash. She will remain a dog for the rest of her life. It'll be much longer and the transformation will happen just as slow as you described her panting and nuzzling the dogs
My Daughter and I Flash the Shopping Mall
by
CMatthews
CMatthews
are you ever going to write another part to this one?