Scorpion50
Member Since October 19, 2009
Naughty 13 year old Kelly (Part 3)
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kelly13
5071 days ago
Scorpion50
5542 days ago
kelly13
5071 days ago
Scorpion50
5542 days ago
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All 3 parts were fantastic! I am anxiously awaiting part 4 and hopefully many more! I'm a rpofessional photographer, so the part about posing for her Daddy has my blood flowing hot!!
The Girl In The Park
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Swampdonkey_2007
Swampdonkey_2007
Pay no attention to these other comments. Sometimes, I don't think these ass-holes even read the stories. They just print the same stupid shit that they throw on everybodies stories! I thought it was great. I look forward to part 2!
my erotic lesson
by
rianiTF
rianiTF
Yes Yes, please conitnue! You need to work on your grammar and definately need to pay some serious attention to breaking your story into smaller paragraphs. It makes for a very difficult read when everything is run together. But, I LOVE the way you broke
Meeting Amanda For The First Time Part 5
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ragnar38
ragnar38
The public exhibition had me ready to explode! The story line is all to real! I must have more! PLEASE conitnue!
My daughter, a little girl no more
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gimmeshelter
gimmeshelter
You gave a lot of detail leading up to the actual sex, but very little detail to the act itself! Otherwise...it was very good! Please continue...just place more detail...where it belongs! Please!
When Mom Was Away
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The_Purvv
The_Purvv
Your story had me riveted! Your attention to detail is phenomenal! I hope we can look forward to more from you!