Scinc
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Girl In The Park
by
Swampdonkey_2007
Swampdonkey_2007
Seriously? How old are you? 15? Doubtful.. I know 15 year olds who can write with better grammar then that..
If you are going to go through the trouble of typing it out.. at least do so with somewhat better grammar.. I am not asking that you be so goo
If you are going to go through the trouble of typing it out.. at least do so with somewhat better grammar.. I am not asking that you be so goo
My First Blowjob
by
mvnu_girl
mvnu_girl
ive read better, it could have been a good bit longer though, it would have made it a lot better
Friends Party
by
TrueStories06
TrueStories06
Yes, i did have potential, for one it was too short, you rushed the sex, and like my good friend michael said, never replace you, with u....
Second off you had some misspellings
Third off..it wasnt that great of a story, it had like no ending, she just says i hope you enjoyed the mess you made, or along those lines