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I found my young brother wanking
Ronboy 5543 days ago
- 3 + Very good story with nice description. However, do learn to write dialogue as the

'he said she said' distracts from an otherwise great story.
Photo Shoot Pt2
Ronboy 5543 days ago
- 0 + "he said, she said" is silly. A fairly good story but learn how to write dialogue.
HomeWork
Ronboy 5543 days ago
- 1 + Hey, Mr. Colman, you got this story off another site. Now I realize the stories are somewhat "public domain" but it is not nice to plagerize. I wrote the story and created the Evans Family 4 yrs ago.
My New Neighbors - 1
Ronboy 5543 days ago
- 4 + Very well written and very exciting. Keep up the good writing.
The painter and my sleeping sister
Ronboy 5543 days ago
- 3 + Good story and plot. However a bit hard to follow with the limited paragraphing. I read the whole story.
Exposing little sister
Ronboy 5543 days ago
- 4 + Fairly well written. Good description and a very good plot. I enjoyed reading it.