Ronboy
Member Since October 19, 2009
Photo Shoot Pt2
"he said, she said" is silly. A fairly good story but learn how to write dialogue.
HomeWork
Hey, Mr. Colman, you got this story off another site. Now I realize the stories are somewhat "public domain" but it is not nice to plagerize. I wrote the story and created the Evans Family 4 yrs ago.
My New Neighbors - 1
Very well written and very exciting. Keep up the good writing.
The painter and my sleeping sister
Good story and plot. However a bit hard to follow with the limited paragraphing. I read the whole story.
Exposing little sister
Fairly well written. Good description and a very good plot. I enjoyed reading it.
'he said she said' distracts from an otherwise great story.