
Reddy
Member Since October 19, 2009
Our Porn Star Family
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humbert1
5115 days ago
Reddy
5112 days ago


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Your story sounds very realistic. I personally know a couple who lost their home to foreclosure and did exactly as you have portrayed. They are not financially very stable. Sex can pay!
Big Brother
Wow this was a true to life adventure. I like realistic stories. My only suggestion would be to use more conversational dialog between the characters.
The Nymphet Boy Next Door
Great story. Gets me stiff.
A Night Of Firsts
A great story, but your paragraphs seem to be ongoing and the reader tends to lose interest. You might try adding some more dialog between the characters. I liked the story line.
Young Kids Mischief
Most interesesting story. I can't imagin parents letting there 13 year olds spend the night together, let alone leaving a girl for a week. I loved your story and hope you will continue, but try to keep it as realistic as possible.
Icy Hot Part 2
May be a great story, but to hard to read.
Whatever it Takes
Other than for a few misspellings this was a great story. It has left me stiff if that is any indication of its quality.
It was done in such a manner that it was almost believable. Hope that you will continue with other stories with similar plots.
It was done in such a manner that it was almost believable. Hope that you will continue with other stories with similar plots.
Long Ago (Repaired)
Yes, I too remember the good old days.
summer fun
I would say for starters you did a darn good job. My only suggestion would be to use more character to character dialog.
Hope to read more about you escapades with your little sister.
Hope to read more about you escapades with your little sister.
Desperate Mother
Had it not been for the single paragraph it would have been perfect. I can appreciate your download problem. Hopefully, my latest strory will not turn out the same way.
Sarah and Steve
I love stories that read as if they could be true. Great work.
Virgin Girl Scout Ripe to Eat
Not very realistic, but a great story. Great copy for masturbation.
Experimenting
Absolutely loved it. Had to read it a second time and jack off.
My life with uncle
OMG! This is a great story and you are a wonderful writer. Stories that are realistic are the best and this reads as if could really happen. How long must we wait for the next installment?
My personal first time
You are an great writer. I try to make all of my stories seem real and the reality of yours put the reader in the story.
Best wishes,
Reddy
Best wishes,
Reddy
Laine After School
I am not into animal stories per say, but I must admit this one was well done. It was presented in such a manner that it was realistic and believable. The reader could actually visualize the events.
You are very articulate.
You are very articulate.
Babysitting My Girlfriends Daughter
It is very obvious why this is one of the top rated stories. Hopefully I will be able to find the next chapter.