Ranger316
Member Since October 27, 2009
Unexpected stop.
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Morgen
Morgen
Loved every second of it, wish there was more with the sister, would have made it longer and I can't get enough of your stories. You write with a skill few others have.
Justine the model student
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horny101
horny101
Enjoyed the story and look forward to more. If their were any mistakes I didn't notice them and they didn't take away from the story, a very excellent job.
School Girl slut
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Goondawg88
Goondawg88
Enjoyed the story, uniform and everything was extremely sexy. Would love to hear more of the later adventures.
Sara tries new things
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kinkypap
kinkypap
Great story, few spelling errors but nothing that slows it down. And I CAN NOT WAIT for part 2
The Agreement
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Trap
Trap
Feel free to discard the more jealous people on the site, you got a shot at a personal fantasy of theirs or even ours and the times caused you to miss it. I don't hold it against you and great story
My employer - My Master
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Naughtyslutwife
Naughtyslutwife
Very interesting, creative in fact. Would enjoy reading more on this subject
working leads to heaven
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asherton
asherton
I do love the braces effect, but I'm not sure why these women are throwing themselves at the main character
Great Day at work leads to great days of ongoing buisness
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asherton
asherton
Its a great story but could use some more development in the how and why department, but overall very much an enjoyable story
Meeting in New Jersey: Part 5
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Ashelie
Ashelie
Hey loved the story, looks like they have been on here for a while and not gotten the attention they diserve. Would love to read the next one if you're willing to right it.
Detention with my teacher and 2 of the sexiest girls in middle school
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macknii78
macknii78
Great Story, can't wait for part 2
The Three Sisters
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Striknyne
Striknyne
It was awsume, I can't wait till part 2 and even a third part comes out. Keep up the good work
Busted By the Cops
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FoxyFiFi
FoxyFiFi
Hot story, wish there would be a sequil or alot more detail, but love the way its saced out, makes it easy to read.
Lights, Camera, Action.
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NoBoundaries
NoBoundaries
Good, its an amazing story and not knowing how they were related till the end made it all the better, very hot.
King's newest sex servent
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RandomScribbles
RandomScribbles
This is an amazing story! It's hotter than hell and is an amazing fantasy. I look forward to reading many more of them.
New House with Dad
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macayla
macayla
The symbols that show up when I look at it make it realy hard to read.
Walking in on Daddy
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JennaWantsItNow
JennaWantsItNow
Very nice story, set up was great. More of the quality I've come to expect from sex stories post
But a few words of advice, watch out for minor but simple formating/gramatical errors; there were only 2 errors I caught and they didn't detract from the story but beware.
Also know when to stop a series, there is nothing worse then seeing a promising series descend into unrealistic mush after the author runs out of material to write about. Fantasy is good but you have to be at least plausible to really draw people in. I also don't see you running out of material soon, so don't let that worry you, but how long the series lasts is only something you can decide on.