RadioEdit
Member Since October 19, 2009
My Secret Love
by
opee1999
5070 days ago
RadioEdit
5542 days ago
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Being a little bit more descriptive, would never hurt. And be a little be different. Alot of the stories here say within the first paragraph. Im 5 something with blah blah hair and blah eyes. Try and get us into the story by something else(ie. being more